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The piano is really quiet first of all. Also I don't think the beat works WITH the piano. They need to line up more with the kick and snare accentuating the piano chords. As it is the beat sounds very simple and bland.

ArtSyndicate responds:

Ok, thanks for the comments, putting it to good use.

Well

I couldn't really discern any real melody or anything in the instruments, and the beat seemed kinda all over the place, but it DID work on some level. So I would say work on tightening up the beat, getting rid of things that maybe don't belong in a hip hop beat, and get a bassline in there. Also try to make the tunes that are sort of in the background at the moment "pop" more, make them real concise and catchy. Hope this helps.

Fucking awesome

I like how you turned what sounds like a horrible experience into enjoyably crazy music... Congratulations

pookicker responds:

Thank you very much! After I heard myself "going nuts", I thought I would share in hopes to help others in the same mimdstate identify with themselves and also entertain others. Thanks for all of your listens!

What the fuck, man?

Why does your shit make me crack up so fucking bad? This track is sick in a weird way.

LiNaK37 responds:

Thank you for the review, and thank you for adding me to you're favourite artists list! I'll be sure to check out your shit soon.

Really good!

I like it a lot. It flows really well and nothing sticks out. I could see this being in a movie! Maybe a pointless review as I didn't suggest anything, but I really can't think of anything to suggest.

Lamplighter responds:

Don't worry about not having any critiques, I'm just glad to hear you liked it :) Thanks for your input.

Meh

What's good about this? As "voice acting" it's sub-par. As singing it's even worse. Of course, I've never heard the original, maybe it sucks too...

Awesomeness

I love this, I just love it. It really gets my heart pumping and it's really fun. I feel what lidlurch is saying but I think that the things he lists as cons really give this track character and make it unique and exciting. Keep it up man.

liqourish responds:

straight 9's :) , almost had a seizure at 1:34. it was definally fun! trying to keep things from moving on my desk lol

Nice

I like how well the instrument's parts go together, but it would have been better if they went together a little more seamlessly. The piano parts sometimes were out of time with the rest but, overall, those aside, really good.

sapoman responds:

The piano is staggered on purpose to give the song a very distinct feel, and make it a little unpredictable.

Not just you

There is no sound.

MaxStayWitaStrap responds:

yeah idk wtf happened...it plays fine on my laptop...i had just finished editing it...cause i use Sony Acid Express...but idk...this shit isacting gay....no homo....hit me up on aim and i can send it to ya'll through that smfh..my fault about this

Owchhh

Your levels are all fucked up and sorry but so are your rhymes... Take some time when you write man... If you do write, if this is freestyle, then good job but otherwise, keep working at it.

I like to make music.

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