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This would be great for a battle rap. Slow enough to speak viscously, but with a hoppin pace. Maybe work on diversifying yourself drum-wise, since that aspect is a little generic.

Zodiax responds:

Ha, I completely agree. I would change it up if I actually had the the original file, but I found this MP3 on the ex's computer (an uncomfortable situation honestly) and decided to upload it incomplete since I couldn't finish it anyway.

Strange though, we never talk anymore and she still listens to the music I make.

I like it! I don't know why no one reviewed. You captured a feeling. I think the drums could have a little more punch and pow, but it's all nice in the big picture. good stuff mang

Zodiax responds:

Many thanks man! I've been working on the punch and pow, but honestly, I don't know what it is, maybe Its just me as a listener to music.

I've been working on making my drums more varied, in fact the bass line in this song was added because I lacked the POW. But yeah, tricks such as that can only get you so far.

Anyhow, thanks for taking the time to listen!

The sample is kinda harsh on the ears, and it gets repetitive. Just seems you didn't exert much effort on this one. come back from that hiatus with a vengeance dude, sometimes a little break is all you need to come up with your best shit.

For the concept behind it, it was okay. As far as lyrics, I liked the subject matter, the themes of self improvement. With that theme in mind, I think that Klazik's vocals could be mastered slightly differently, it's kinda airy and harsh. Mao's part was the most solid IMO and he came with good energy. Wolfie might need to speak up and swing his voice a little more, it's like he's talking(though he's got a cool voice for rap). I also wanted to say, I didn't make the beat alone, it's a collab(With dude called KR)
IN all, there's some brushing up to do, but I like the concept. Actually, I guess the concept itself is like practice so it's all good.
Keep it up guys.

ILLLLL. Oh shnikeys! This is god damned excellent! Some pre-lotus material. Hot shit. I can't stop complimenting it. I love raw snareless beats!(though honestly, you could have gone on a good 5 minutes if you added a snare and dropped the beat harder around 2:00 or so, but I digress) Great production and sounds, really takes me places dog. You got something going on. Continue! YOOOOO
We should definitely collab.

BOULLIE responds:

Let me know what's good and I'm there.

Beat is cool. I like dat bass(did you make it?). Great lyrics too! You've got a good voice for rap I methinks. But maybe they could be mastered to be more audible? I can tell they sound good but sometimes they're hard to hear over the beat. Otherwise, man, for "taking a crack at it" this is fucking tight. make more!

Ignyte responds:

Hey,

Yeah I made everything in this song ( bass included), I know what you mean with the volume of the vocals, I kept them a little low so you can hear the song a bit better and I spent a fair while on the orchestrals and I didnt want to cover them up heaps with my rapping.

Cheers fore taking the time to leave a comment man, really appreciated!

Shit, I don't know what to say, you're on another level. great strings and vibes! I'm gonna go ahead and agree with everyone, it's funky

Crueltool responds:

Thanks man!!! coming up next fresh track, hope today...

Oh shz! niceely done! the bass, the hats, and of course the synths are all awesome! good job!

BOULLIE responds:

Thanks G

oh so good. great for lyrics, but also has so much variety you can just groove to the beat.
I'm not sure if you're one person or a team... but I'd like to hear you try something really abstract, that doesn't stick so rigidly to the rap beat song structure: it's obvious you've got that and your production down pat. maybe try somewhat of a unorthodox drum pattern or something.
just a thought. Keep up the great work regardless
peace

Crueltool responds:

Yes! my next beatwork will be different. Promise
Thanks man

Hey, not bad! Do more raps!

Druids-Warcry responds:

will do man! yall will be seeing more projects from me soon

I like to make music.

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