Sounds like pretty good indie rock. Cool song man, good work. Only thing since I gotta give some crit is that the sounds blend a bit too much, so maybe try to separate them into their own spots a little more. That's all. Keep it up mang
Sounds like pretty good indie rock. Cool song man, good work. Only thing since I gotta give some crit is that the sounds blend a bit too much, so maybe try to separate them into their own spots a little more. That's all. Keep it up mang
yeah man, I feel you. It starts getting a bit mushy around the middle. Thanks for taking the time to listen and review though. :)
Definitely dirty and dark, got an eerie feel. Good for a cypher. Little repetitive but the drum fills and changups make up for that. Goes pretty hard, keep it up.
appreciate the feedback!
Damn son this shit hits hard too! I like your beats!
thanks mister
Simple and effective!! I like it all! good work
Thanks homie X)
Haven't made anything full in sooo loooong. Dont know what's up with me this summer
Yo this'd make a sickass beat! good tune man.
Thanks, man. That electric guitar tune is prolly my fav part
Okay constructive crit:
Your vocals are very quiet in the mix, don't be afraid to make them more prominent so that we can hear what you are saying more clearly.
You have two vocal tracks going on at the same time, one is presumably there to backup the main vocal, but they are not synced. I think this can be remedied by just practicing your flow more, and getting it dialed down to a really precise placement of words. This way you will also sound more confident and can make your words punch more, if you know what I mean. They hit way harder when they have a well defined flow and more force.
Hook: Doesn't seem to be on beat. Not a fan of autotune either, but that's just me.
You seem like you could have something here, beat is nice, and you seem to have a good idea of the feeling and theme of your song. just needs to be more dialed in and clear.
Thank you so much for your very insightful review! I will take this into deep consideration in my next track. Comments and especially comment like this give me much motivation, I cannot thank you enough.
Best regards, Amon
Sickness! I actually like that it's beatless. very soothing and nice!
Meditation music, for the zen garden. Well done.
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