B-RadGfromOV's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hip Hop Hoop2]

Damn son this shit hits hard too! I like your beats!

piggemz responds:

thanks mister

[Downwordz]

Simple and effective!! I like it all! good work

BOULLIE responds:

Thanks homie X)

Haven't made anything full in sooo loooong. Dont know what's up with me this summer

[doodooberries]

Yo this'd make a sickass beat! good tune man.

phosphorusprocedure responds:

Thanks, man. That electric guitar tune is prolly my fav part

[fOREIGN jORDAN lAUREN]

Okay constructive crit:

Your vocals are very quiet in the mix, don't be afraid to make them more prominent so that we can hear what you are saying more clearly.

You have two vocal tracks going on at the same time, one is presumably there to backup the main vocal, but they are not synced. I think this can be remedied by just practicing your flow more, and getting it dialed down to a really precise placement of words. This way you will also sound more confident and can make your words punch more, if you know what I mean. They hit way harder when they have a well defined flow and more force.

Hook: Doesn't seem to be on beat. Not a fan of autotune either, but that's just me.

You seem like you could have something here, beat is nice, and you seem to have a good idea of the feeling and theme of your song. just needs to be more dialed in and clear.

r4godofsun responds:

Thank you so much for your very insightful review! I will take this into deep consideration in my next track. Comments and especially comment like this give me much motivation, I cannot thank you enough.
Best regards, Amon

[Uno]

Sickness! I actually like that it's beatless. very soothing and nice!

phosphorusprocedure responds:

yeah, I really liked the gtr tone on here

must be that fruity phaser

[Lay In]

Meditation music, for the zen garden. Well done.

BOULLIE responds:

Onegai shimassssu

[No zone]

Pretty decent! Same sample from your beat Touch, with some others. I had some silly freestyles goin on it. Tell your cousins they should get some software and do more.

BOULLIE responds:

Yeah! It's the same kit I think, and definitely some of the same sounds. I'm tryna get them hooked man no doubt! I think they need this kind of avenue of self expression.

[Sloppy]

Spongebob on shrooms. This is pretty beautiful actually. A very watery quality, some assonance but it is oh so sweet sounding. I love it.
I've gotta sample you.

phosphorusprocedure responds:

Thanks, dude! Part of the weird cassette quality was the plugins I used. You heard them on that last track, albeit cranked up a bit. Lo-Fizer and FerricTDS on the master. Not as cranked here. I thought it sounded pretty cool.