If you were going for creepy
Then maybe slow it down some.
If you were going for creepy
Then maybe slow it down some.
Hehe, wow, I can't believe someone actually downloaded this! XD
Well ok, but still it doesn't have that creepy radio feeling I would it to have.
Nah, never mind...
Have a nice day,
KKS
Very sweet
"please understand that i made all the melodies in this."
I immediately thought they were samples!
I like that groovy guitar, man, it's my favorite part of this. I did think some of the piano parts were a little too aggressive to fit, but it doesn't affect it that much, and the fact that you wrote and recorded it all yourself more than makes up for it.
Great as usual Haywyre, but you don't even need reviews to tell you that at this point do you? lol you already know you're getting all tens from everyone.
lol, i just need criticism, thanks a lot tho man, it really means a lot to me.
Nice!
Really pro, and not bad for your first rap BJ. Solid track, keep it up you guys.
thanks dude, yea thats my very first time rappin before, thats why its only 1 verse.
i was wanting to also add more to this one maybe, like a scratching after.
if you have any idead or pointers for my voice, style, or words, let me kno on AIM.
peace.
Uhhh
Your lyrics are whack. I like the sample laugh being used in the beat though.
hahaha who the fuck are you.
your fuckin whack i read your shit that said you want to "rap"
good luck with that
im farther now than you will ever be in your entire life.
so shut the fuck up
you will never amount to anything
B-RAD....
Alright
BAF's lines were little slow for my taste and that only means less words, less content. KlazikNadi's were pretty cool though, as was the instrumental.
I gotcha on the slowness but honestly this is a major break for me in terms on content, normally my songs are pretty wordy, this was more of a 'fun' song to do if anything, thanks for the listen and review.
OH!
Been dazed and confused! for so long it's not tr-- wait. It sounds a LOT like Zeppelin, but I can dig it. Nice playing.
Didn't even think of that but, yeah, it does. Thanks though.
Ew.
I agree. Ear rape. This just doesn't sound right.
My other stuff is way better than this, honest. :>
Alright
The drums are nice, but the first synth sound that continues to play through the whole song started to give me a headache. After the intro, maybe switch it up. and tryt o make the synths follow the drums a little.
Thanks for the review! I appreciate it. Yeah.. The bass synth was BAD but it fit better than my others with this piece, so I had to use it. I'm not so good with rhythms yet though, and everything's kind of doing its own thing, I know I've gotta work on that, but I'm getting MUCH better. Glad the drums were good, those were the best part imo.
Eh...
Work on the flow. Work on it a lot. Your rhymes sound like you're trying too hard. And complaining the whole time is not enjoyable to hear. I am not a "zero bombing prick" so don't get mad when I give you a low score.
Haha, that fine dude. At least you gave your point. I only hate the anynomous and uncritical ones.
Thanks the review!
~PSB
More like hip hop
Doesn't sound like R&B to me. And after a while that high pitched synth started to hurt my ears. An okay track.
Yeah, I played with turning the synth down, but I decided to leave it where it was.
I think you're right about the genre, not sure what I was thinking. I'll switch it back to hip hop
Anyway, Thanks for the Review!
I like to make music.
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