B-RadGfromOV's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Into The Ark (Remix)]

Groovy man! bumps. it would be better if the drums switched up a bit, but it's cool.

[fOREIGN jORDAN lAUREN]

Okay constructive crit:

Your vocals are very quiet in the mix, don't be afraid to make them more prominent so that we can hear what you are saying more clearly.

You have two vocal tracks going on at the same time, one is presumably there to backup the main vocal, but they are not synced. I think this can be remedied by just practicing your flow more, and getting it dialed down to a really precise placement of words. This way you will also sound more confident and can make your words punch more, if you know what I mean. They hit way harder when they have a well defined flow and more force.

Hook: Doesn't seem to be on beat. Not a fan of autotune either, but that's just me.

You seem like you could have something here, beat is nice, and you seem to have a good idea of the feeling and theme of your song. just needs to be more dialed in and clear.

r4godofsun responds:

Thank you so much for your very insightful review! I will take this into deep consideration in my next track. Comments and especially comment like this give me much motivation, I cannot thank you enough.
Best regards, Amon

[Uno]

Sickness! I actually like that it's beatless. very soothing and nice!

phosphorusprocedure responds:

yeah, I really liked the gtr tone on here

must be that fruity phaser

[WizStat - Lilytone]

Very interesting. Love those, drums and bass, it's pretty badass sounding. shit's groovy and it I think it shines particularly in the quieter part (1:54).

[Sink or Swim]

WHoooa! This is nuts man! Goes hard as fuck. I don't even know what to say that can properly capture the sexiness of this track. So much diversity here, and so well arranged. holy shit. 6 out of 5. downloaded.

[Lay In]

Meditation music, for the zen garden. Well done.

BOULLIE responds:

Onegai shimassssu

[Bless the Child]

Very cool! Flow was really good in parts. some sections got a little sloppy, like you kinda weren't sure how to fit it onto the beat. That can be avoided by just taking your time and making sure a line flows before moving on to writing the next.

Vocab was great and I really liked the alliteration (ruddy routers ruts ran run, etc) It's a much too overlooked aspect of poetry in hip hop.

I think this was a great effort, and I hope you do more. You're weren't far off from this verse being perfect, and if you work at it and take some extra time you can dial it down like you do your beats.

Looking forward to the next one, and now I'm interested in a rap collab!

[No zone]

Pretty decent! Same sample from your beat Touch, with some others. I had some silly freestyles goin on it. Tell your cousins they should get some software and do more.

BOULLIE responds:

Yeah! It's the same kit I think, and definitely some of the same sounds. I'm tryna get them hooked man no doubt! I think they need this kind of avenue of self expression.