Groovy man! bumps. it would be better if the drums switched up a bit, but it's cool.
Groovy man! bumps. it would be better if the drums switched up a bit, but it's cool.
Okay constructive crit:
Your vocals are very quiet in the mix, don't be afraid to make them more prominent so that we can hear what you are saying more clearly.
You have two vocal tracks going on at the same time, one is presumably there to backup the main vocal, but they are not synced. I think this can be remedied by just practicing your flow more, and getting it dialed down to a really precise placement of words. This way you will also sound more confident and can make your words punch more, if you know what I mean. They hit way harder when they have a well defined flow and more force.
Hook: Doesn't seem to be on beat. Not a fan of autotune either, but that's just me.
You seem like you could have something here, beat is nice, and you seem to have a good idea of the feeling and theme of your song. just needs to be more dialed in and clear.
Thank you so much for your very insightful review! I will take this into deep consideration in my next track. Comments and especially comment like this give me much motivation, I cannot thank you enough.
Best regards, Amon
Sickness! I actually like that it's beatless. very soothing and nice!
Very interesting. Love those, drums and bass, it's pretty badass sounding. shit's groovy and it I think it shines particularly in the quieter part (1:54).
WHoooa! This is nuts man! Goes hard as fuck. I don't even know what to say that can properly capture the sexiness of this track. So much diversity here, and so well arranged. holy shit. 6 out of 5. downloaded.
Meditation music, for the zen garden. Well done.
Onegai shimassssu
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