Uhhh
Your lyrics are whack. I like the sample laugh being used in the beat though.
Uhhh
Your lyrics are whack. I like the sample laugh being used in the beat though.
hahaha who the fuck are you.
your fuckin whack i read your shit that said you want to "rap"
good luck with that
im farther now than you will ever be in your entire life.
so shut the fuck up
you will never amount to anything
B-RAD....
Alright
BAF's lines were little slow for my taste and that only means less words, less content. KlazikNadi's were pretty cool though, as was the instrumental.
I gotcha on the slowness but honestly this is a major break for me in terms on content, normally my songs are pretty wordy, this was more of a 'fun' song to do if anything, thanks for the listen and review.
OH!
Been dazed and confused! for so long it's not tr-- wait. It sounds a LOT like Zeppelin, but I can dig it. Nice playing.
Didn't even think of that but, yeah, it does. Thanks though.
Ew.
I agree. Ear rape. This just doesn't sound right.
My other stuff is way better than this, honest. :>
I like it
It's strange, the samples are all cool, and I love that there's actually real scratching on it. No one on NG does that. Good track, bad trip. lol
Alright
The drums are nice, but the first synth sound that continues to play through the whole song started to give me a headache. After the intro, maybe switch it up. and tryt o make the synths follow the drums a little.
Thanks for the review! I appreciate it. Yeah.. The bass synth was BAD but it fit better than my others with this piece, so I had to use it. I'm not so good with rhythms yet though, and everything's kind of doing its own thing, I know I've gotta work on that, but I'm getting MUCH better. Glad the drums were good, those were the best part imo.
Eh...
Work on the flow. Work on it a lot. Your rhymes sound like you're trying too hard. And complaining the whole time is not enjoyable to hear. I am not a "zero bombing prick" so don't get mad when I give you a low score.
Haha, that fine dude. At least you gave your point. I only hate the anynomous and uncritical ones.
Thanks the review!
~PSB
Why????
Why did you disgrace MSI with this filth?
More like hip hop
Doesn't sound like R&B to me. And after a while that high pitched synth started to hurt my ears. An okay track.
Yeah, I played with turning the synth down, but I decided to leave it where it was.
I think you're right about the genre, not sure what I was thinking. I'll switch it back to hip hop
Anyway, Thanks for the Review!
Huh?
You have lyrics but no singing.
Sorry, I don't have the capabilities at the moment of recording my voice to put into the song, but even if I did, I probably wouldn't. What I post on Newgrounds are just the Finale versions of my songs; this means that they aren't finalized yet. I have every intention of performing these songs in a band in the future.
As to the reason why I included the lyrics without having actual singing, this was just done for completion purposes. They are just there to display, I suppose... I don't believe I would feel right if I uploaded the song without them. Either way, thanks for the review =]
Edit for anyone watching in the last decade: I synthed all of of my vocals because I didn't have the tools to do so. Also: they sucked. My lyrics were very middle school, and duh, old Newgrounds. Why are you here?
I like to make music.
Age 32, Male
Human
Joined on 8/29/09