Nice
sounds like the smacking noise when you're hittin a girl with a fat ass from behind.
Nice
sounds like the smacking noise when you're hittin a girl with a fat ass from behind.
I giggled. Thanks B-RadGfromOV
Simply Excellent.
A superb piece of work. At first I saw a caravan(like in the title) meandering across a desert. Then the music built up and exploded as a group of bandits attacked. A battle ensued, music perfectly matching every blow dealt, and I saw someone fleeing the battle. It must have been someone of importance as their clothes were of much greater quality than the rest of the caravan. The track calmed down as the person trudged on through the desert, not knowing where or what direction they were headed. End. (hey, you said it can provide visuals, I'm telling what I saw)
Excellent! Thank you.
Okay
I think the beat needs to be closer together. The beats shouldn't land on the bassline, it makes it really slow and boring. Also try to make the beat a little more unique, play around with different kick and snare placements and you'll come up with something more original.
Nice
It's very simple, and I do like the relaxed, laid back feel, but I think it was a little empty. Maybe throw a nice chill pad in there as part of that long intro to keep people listening, then change it up, but keep it going the rest of the track, you know, for a fuller, less repetitive sound.
Isn't this
against the rules? And why upload it by itself if you're already planning on using it for a song AND it's protected by copyright?
i did this to show my friend he bit i was talking about
Really nice
though there were a few sour notes.
So sad
So touching. I rarely hear spoken poetry on music like this. It works very well, and you tell a story well.
I just couldn't get the flow right for a rap, so I decided to go with spoken word. I'm glad you like it
Awesome
I have to admit, I was about to jump to conclusions and jsut listen to another song, but I read your comments and I'm glad I stayed! This was freaking epic man. You did a great job on this(though I thought it could have used another one of those huge jams at the end too, but that's okay :P). Nice track man, keep up the great work.
Thanks!
I like it
I love stuff with lots of different people on the same beat, like Bone Thugs, Jurassic 5, and y'all killed it.
Thanks for dropping by man, glad you liked it! :D
Very cool
It seems like every time it loops it gets better and better, and it loops so well too! Very good job on the notes, it's like you squeezed an entire song onto one little loop!
Hehe lol, thanks! I'm glad you thought the notes were good, in songs like these I usually do discordant notes because I'm only Grade 4 Theory :P. Glad you enjoyed the loop, and thanks for reviewing!
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