Indeed. This is good. Nice words, comin confident. Flow goes hard in some places, flies off the beat in others, but doesn't stop you from gettin it in. Write it how you're gonna spit it though! Sounds like sometimes you miss a cue then play catch up with the beat. It's all hood, just a freewrite I understand, and it does the job for what it is. I really need to do something like this and just talk some shit one of these days... Seems fun haha