I like those background sticks or whatever they are, they give it a cool sound.
I like those background sticks or whatever they are, they give it a cool sound.
I got the idea from you but I need to add a bassline...not my forte
Indeed. This is good. Nice words, comin confident. Flow goes hard in some places, flies off the beat in others, but doesn't stop you from gettin it in. Write it how you're gonna spit it though! Sounds like sometimes you miss a cue then play catch up with the beat. It's all hood, just a freewrite I understand, and it does the job for what it is. I really need to do something like this and just talk some shit one of these days... Seems fun haha
Word G-Minor. If this was a serious attempt, I probably would've reworked the word and have the lyrics memorized; for these freewrites I like to record as soon as Im done writing the lyrics. It's fun.
Thanks for the insightful review, I appreciate it.
I agree with Jadzxa! Very relaxing and nice. It has that soft rock feel, and I don't really listen to soft rock but this is very good! The guitar has that soaring quality to it, and the synthy sound only compliments it. I would like to sample this maybe. Keep it up!
PS I know a band that has this sort of style except hardcoreish, they are excellent if I may recommend them. they are HORSE the band. gotta get used to them though cause they are weird. who knows, it may be inspirational
cut......cut..........cut......CUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!
I like the beat and definitely like the other sounds, not sure if sample or synth. however I think the bass that joined in could be a little more special, maybe tuned differently or just more selective about what notes hit, and when. But yeah good stuff
Thanks
This would be great for a battle rap. Slow enough to speak viscously, but with a hoppin pace. Maybe work on diversifying yourself drum-wise, since that aspect is a little generic.
Ha, I completely agree. I would change it up if I actually had the the original file, but I found this MP3 on the ex's computer (an uncomfortable situation honestly) and decided to upload it incomplete since I couldn't finish it anyway.
Strange though, we never talk anymore and she still listens to the music I make.
I like to make music.
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